Research+Report+Outline

**Introduction Paragraph** The goal is to grab the readers attention, and layout your “argument” (main points). Details, facts, opinions, etc are fort he body paragraphs. In your Intro, develop a strong thesis statement and focus on **telling**, **not explaining** , what your main points will be in your essay. **THESIS STATEMENT:** //Eradicate infectious diseases in the world. The government and people are he ones who suffer.// **HOOK:** //When Infectious diseases are mentioned think about the world. Think about those who suffer. What help do they receive from the government?// **Main Point 1:** //Small pox was sucessfully eradicated.// **Main Point 2:** //Polio is being currently eradicated.// **Main Point 3:** //Malaria in found in Africa and is trying to be eradicated.// **Body Paragraphs** The “meat and potatoes” of your essay. This is where you give the foundation of your argument, make your point, convince the reader that your thesis statement is true, action must be taken, change needs to happen, etc. **Body 1** Support Detail/Evidence 1: The Global Health Council explains about how there are many vaccines around the world for Small Pox. **Detail Explanation:** Ring vaccination, which consisted of identifying those with smallpox, vaccinating their closest contacts and then vaccinating their (the contacts') closest contacts, and so on. This process relied on surveillance and vaccination teams that contained outbreaks by protecting any potential contacts of the original case. **Support Detail/Evidence 2:** The Global medicine website explains how it was successful to eradicate Small pox. Smallpox was one of the most devastating diseases known to humanity. Before an effective treatment was developed, the disease killed as many as 30% of those infected. Between 65 and 80 % of the survivors were marked with deep pitted scars (pockmarks), most prominent on the face. An important discovery was made by Edward Jenner in 1798, who demonstrated that inoculation with cowpox could protect against smallpox. The eradication programme that followed was very successful and smallpox was pushed back to the horn of Africa and then to a single last natural case in Somalia, 1977.
 * Research Report Outline**
 * Main Point 1:** //Small pox was such a large epidemic; but it was eradicated.//
 * Detail Explanation: Small pox **

 ** SUCCESFULLY ERADICATED ** **Transition Statement:** //Small Pox was successfully eradicated but now there are more diseases in the world that ned to be eradicated.// **Body 2** Support Detail/Evidence 1: The Global Polio Eradication Initiative has been figuring out a cure for Polio. **Detail Explanation:** **:** **According to the [|Global Polio Eradication Initiative], there have been 663 cases of polio reported worldwide this year, compared with 1,020 cases at this point in 2009. The initiative reports that poliomyelitis (polio) is a highly infectious disease caused by a virus that invades the nervous system and can cause total paralysis in a matter of hours. While the disease can strike at any age, it mainly affects children under the age of 3, who account for more than 50 percent of all cases. **    **Support Detail/Evidence 2: President Obama is currently trying to help those that need medication against Polio.** **Support Detail/Evidence 3:** Polio has been reported in Indonesia on May of the year 2005. **Detail Explanation:** The current polio epidemic in Indonesia is a reminder that infectious agents know no political or race boundaries. Like most of the world, this country was polio-free and prior to this outbreak, there were only 6 countries with endemic polio: Nigeria, India, Pakistan, Afghanistan, Niger and Egypt. The outbreak in Indonesia began in March 2005 and to date, in excess of 225 children have been paralyzed due to imported poliovirus. The infections were initially in 2 provinces on Java but have spread to involve Jakarta, as well as Sumatra and Central Java. //Transition Statement: Eradication on Polio is a big epidemic that the government is trying to reduce world wide. Malaria is another giant epidemic throughout the world.// ** Body 3 ** **Main Point 1:** //In Africa Malaria is currently trying to eradicate this disease.// Support Detail/Evidence 1: The Global Fund to Fight AIDS, Tuberculosis and Malria is an organization that is trying to find a cure. **Detail Explanation:** Establishment of initiatives to combat the disease, such as the [|Global Fund to Fight AIDS, Tuberculosis and Malaria], provide a mechanism for committed and coordinated funding among donors. **Support Detail/Evidence 2:** Acorroding to **goshen.edu Malaria is reciving many funds and support. **    **Detail Explanation:**  Malaria is perhaps the most famous of these first three eradication efforts, a result of the large amount of publicity and funding that the elimination effort received. During its 15 year run, the program was manned by about 500 WHO employees and received roughly one-third of all WHO’s expenditures. **Support Detail/Evidence 3:** Malaria is caused by mosquitos that carry this disease. **Detail Explanation: Malaria is caused by a parasite called Plasmodium, which is transmitted via the bites of infected mosquitoes. In the human body, the parasites multiply in the liver, and then infect red blood cells. **    **Transition Statement:**    //Infectious diseases are all over the world especially in places where many can't afford medication.//
 * Detail Explanation:** More than two centuries later, smallpox has been eradicated for more than 30 years and the desire to eradicate other diseases is even stronger.
 * Main Point 1:** //Polio is currently being eradicated throughout the world.//
 * Support Detail/Evidence 3:** The United States is trying to provide the money in order to eradicate the disease.
 * Detail Explanation:** The United States has provided more than $1.8 billion to the Global Polio Eradication Initiative since 1988, as well as extensive technical support from the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention and the U.S. Agency for International Development. The president announced his Global Health Initiative proposal of a $63 billion effort to improve and expand access to health services for the world’s poor, which underscores the U.S. commitment to a comprehensive global health strategy, including polio eradication, Hussain said.